Monday, August 24, 2009

8-24-09 SKeenan


Playing with a new layout for this old western town painting. This piece has officially become the bane of my existence, a thorn in my side, the pebble in my shoe, the poo in my cereal...ok the last one went too far. Anyways , I think I'm getting closer to what it should be. Any feedback would be appreciated on the comp :)

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  2. Reference? could you be more specific on whats not working with the composition? I've used tons of reference from photos, and old Disney and warner bros. background art.

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  3. you may be making this too complicated...
    work from your reference more

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  4. yeah, I think your right man. Back to the drawing board... I need to losen up even more. Thanks!

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  5. you don't need any more reference at this stage. Try doing quick value studies. try making the house on the far left larger and in shadow- also try bring the right building closer and consequently bigger... the focus seems to be the church so lead my eye into it.

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