Tuesday, January 19, 2010

01.19.10 DHohn


 The first in a new series: Rebecca
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5 comments:

  1. leemoyerJanuary 19, 2010 at 11:56 PM

    I feel way too drawn to the top of the window. Will there be type to chill it out? Otherwise cool.

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  2. David HohnJanuary 20, 2010 at 6:31 AM

    Thanks for the comment! No, there won't be any type on this side of the spread. I'll keep this in mind as I move forward. The viewers focus should stay on the girl

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  3. Howell GolsonJanuary 20, 2010 at 7:15 AM

    David, her arm is bothering me. that forearm is freakishly long in relation to her arm. I just can't get past it. It's all i can look at. otherwise i like the composition.

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  4. David HohnJanuary 20, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    LOL! -- Howell, I probably read your comment with more emotion that you intended, but it still made me laugh a bit.

    I'm sorry to have caused you any consternation (however inadvertently) and I will mention that this is just a rough sketch. While I am moving away from the realism that marked my early body of work . . . I haven't yet gone mad! I'll re-post this as a finished sketch at which time I hope you'll dissect the hell out of my figure's anatomy.

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  5. Howell GolsonJanuary 20, 2010 at 6:33 PM

    haha, didn't have any emotion, really... I'm not against stylization, of course. My brain just likes things to make sense is all! But if you have a stylistic reason that her forearm should be wicked long, i think it should be stylistically apparent to the viewer (?) You obviously can choose to disagree. But then we can't be friends :(

    That's all :)

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