9.27.09 LMoyer

So I've opted to try finishing this one first.
I'm pleased with the changes, but wonder if I've missed any opportunities.

9.25.09 LMoyer

Alrighty, I'm working on a more painterly style. I've got almost a month until World Fantasy Con (where a lot of publishing biz goes on in the bars and restaurants). And I think I can finish one (if not both) of these pieces in time to pop it into a new portfolio. Therefore, it's important to find out:

1. Which to put more emphasis on (in case I only have time to finish one).
2. Issues or comments. Do any of the basics not make sense? Thoughts?

Thanks for your input.